Friday, November 18, 2011
blog post 7 the hero
The hero in my book is a boy named stanley he doesnt do anything spectacular but in a way he makes right choices and looks in diffrent peoples perspectives to get threw this time in his life. 1 architype would be innocent because he is sent to bootcamp for a crime he did not do. and another would be sacrifice because he sacrifices twice 1 is takign the blame of the crime and 2 is ditching the boot camp to look for a friend he could of died in the desert but he made it threw and these are a couple of architypes a magnificent person could have.
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What book are you reading for this? Make sure that you identify both the author and the title at the start of each of your blog posts.
ReplyDeleteThere are a couple of fix ups you could do here to make your posts more easily read.
1. Capitalize proper names, like Stanley.
2. Make sure that you include an apostrophe when you are using contractions, like doesn't; or when you are indicating possession, like people's perspectives.
3. Check your spelling carefully before posting and correct any spelling errors or typos, like diffrent (different), threw (through), architype (archetype), takign (taking).
4. Fix your run on sentences, like "The hero in my book is a boy named Stanley. He doesn't do anything spectacular, but in a way he makes the right choices and looks at different people's perspectives to get through this time in his life."
You have some good ideas, but they are often hard to find because your reader spends so much time trying to wade through the errors you have made.