Friday, October 28, 2011
blog post number 4
the main character in my story is a teen named stanley he is a nice boy with not alot of friends hes part of a poor family with really sick parents but he is very smart.....and 1 day soemthing really bad happend to him he was just going for a walk then all of a sudden these shoes fell off a bridge and intoh is arms and eh thought it was a mirracle but minutes later cops stopped him and put him in court for stealign the sneakers they were singned and used by a pre baseball player and stanley was called guilty for soemthign he didnt do and now hes in a bootcamp for 12 months. this relates to a youtube video where a guy gets guilty for soemthing he didnt do
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Use a capital when you start a sentence.
ReplyDeleteYou should use a capital when you start a sentace, watch out for run on sentances also you should check you spelling for errors before posting also use more punctuation. If you had these problems fixed you could have a great blog post there is alot of detail but not to much that it gives away the book. How do you like the book so far? I think this book sounds very interesting.
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